It's a wonderful essay. I especially like how you elaborated on the concept, and ended on an anecdote. To me, it's outside of the usual essay structure I'm used to, which you've spoken about breaking out of, and I like it. I look forward to reading more of these essays!
oh ! wow ! i have seen these strings too !
i see them coming directly from the center of my chest (where i pretend my heart is)
in my mind thaire pattern is almost like the downward arcing trails from fireworks
with the different trails leading to the hearts of everyone i ever knew (or cared about)
i also see them arcing through time
coming out of the past towards me
when i find someone i (practically) (immediately) fall for/connect with
yer a scientist…is this string theory ?! 🤣
It's a wonderful essay. I especially like how you elaborated on the concept, and ended on an anecdote. To me, it's outside of the usual essay structure I'm used to, which you've spoken about breaking out of, and I like it. I look forward to reading more of these essays!
A small note…I originally wrote this three years ago.